I wish Substack had avatars because I would post one of me flat on my back laughing out loud. š¤£ My God, that is hilarious. Wendell talked Dale to death! For fourteen years. I canāt stop laughing. I absolutely loved it. It was so good and so unique the way you wrote this horror story. And that title, Talkinā is Perfect. Brilliant. The dialogue was on point. This was so delightful and hilarious and horrifying. Iām reading it now at almost two in the morning, laughing out loud, waking up the neighborhood.
Wendell talked Dale to death for 14 years š. Poor Dale had a moment of silence, but not for long. Wendellās ass returned from the dead. I wonder what will happen in the afterlife? How will Dale escape?
Iā¦ I love this. Andy no notes. As if I were reading Poe again for the first time.
šÆšÆ that is the craziest compliment I've ever received. Thank you!! š„°š
Iām still sitting with it and these characters these poor characters. Well done.
Wow!
I'm glad you liked it! š
Talking in his sleep got me š
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I wish Substack had avatars because I would post one of me flat on my back laughing out loud. š¤£ My God, that is hilarious. Wendell talked Dale to death! For fourteen years. I canāt stop laughing. I absolutely loved it. It was so good and so unique the way you wrote this horror story. And that title, Talkinā is Perfect. Brilliant. The dialogue was on point. This was so delightful and hilarious and horrifying. Iām reading it now at almost two in the morning, laughing out loud, waking up the neighborhood.
š¤£š¤£ poor Wendell and Dale
Wendell talked Dale to death for 14 years š. Poor Dale had a moment of silence, but not for long. Wendellās ass returned from the dead. I wonder what will happen in the afterlife? How will Dale escape?
That's how I imagine Hell, well done.
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this is my first read of your work and i justā¦ absolutely love this! absolutely wonderful.
Oh, welcome! So glad you found me :) And that you liked this story! š
i LOVED it! absolutely enthralled by the second line, tbqh!
I spend so much time on openings and endings and I love when one really lands š„°
For the Irish Spring soap alone, I donāt condone, but I understand. This gripped me in the best way!
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Poor Dale! True to life horror, well done. š š
Thank you! I know...poor Dale š
Good one!
Thanks! š I'm glad you liked it!