This was a great short story. It absolutely nailed an eery rural family of killer(s) vibe, with the perfect amount of exposition to get the reader invested. I really enjoyed it. The casualness after the fact was also a great humorous break between horror bits, made me smile.
Oooh this is chilling 🥶. Larry’s father raised him to be a killer! Family is cold. I want to read the book. I was never into horror until I started reading your stories.
I’m always looking forward to reading your stories! I always think I know where the story is going but then BAM you switch up and I absolutely love it. Amazing work Andy 💚
This was an excellent story- i loved the pacing and the way you balanced sweet family life on a knife edge with the implication of menacing horror- Bravo 👏
A masterclass in pacing and economy. Brutally effective and not a word wasted.
Thanks! I appreciate this and glad you enjoyed the story. I’ve spent this year working on pacing and I’m always happy when it gets noticed! 💛
This was a great short story. It absolutely nailed an eery rural family of killer(s) vibe, with the perfect amount of exposition to get the reader invested. I really enjoyed it. The casualness after the fact was also a great humorous break between horror bits, made me smile.
I’m glad you liked it! 😎
I still wish the girls didn’t need to rely on Larry, though. Maybe they need to get him to teach them how to wield a mattock…?
Oh he definitely should teach them! You're right!
Really enjoyed the simplicity and brevity of a ‘sweet’ horror story. Practically perfect! Thank you.
Thanks! So glad you liked it 💛
I had to read this again. Brilliant writing and character development. So good.
Oooh this is chilling 🥶. Larry’s father raised him to be a killer! Family is cold. I want to read the book. I was never into horror until I started reading your stories.
Nothing like a good revenge story 😎
Oh, this was so good. Sparse and clean and brutal. I loved it.
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it! 💛
I’m always looking forward to reading your stories! I always think I know where the story is going but then BAM you switch up and I absolutely love it. Amazing work Andy 💚
Thanks!! You know I love me little twists and turns 😎
This was an excellent story- i loved the pacing and the way you balanced sweet family life on a knife edge with the implication of menacing horror- Bravo 👏
Thank you! So happy you enjoyed it 💛
I didn't see that coming. Well done, Andy!
Thank you!! I’m glad you liked it 💛
the whole tone of this was spot on. i loved the dialogue and the swift pacing. chills!
Thanks! So glad you enjoyed 💛