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Cassandra O'Shea's avatar

I enjoyed this very much. Thank you for writing it.

Andy Edge's avatar

I’m so glad you liked it! Thank you for reading šŸ’›

A.M. Blackmere | Author's avatar

I love this!! Well done.

Andy Edge's avatar

Thank you! šŸ’›

Alex Jenkin's avatar

Brutal.. there is horror writing and there’s these which are just plain scary. Done well Andy.

Andy Edge's avatar

Thank you! I've had this world in my head for awhile now so I finally started writing it out in these shorts. I think they're very relevant to what's happening in the US right now. Thanks for reading and sharing šŸ’›

Alex Jenkin's avatar

Yeah definitely. You capture the humanity of it all very well so it’s not just a hypothetical dystopia but something that we feel on a persona level.

williamphaynes/elliott's avatar

YOU'RE right on how fast people turn on each other.

Andy Edge's avatar

They really will, in the blink of an eye.

Naz Pankey's avatar

Oh my God what a story! And the twist… That Darlene was a horror. I was rooting for her, and then she just flipped. Each woman for herself. Awful. We can NEVER LET THIS HAPPEN. Truly horrifying.

Andy Edge's avatar

You never know what people will do in a panic.