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Naz Pankey's avatar

This is a masterpiece. So horrifying!

Inga Jones Writes Thrillers's avatar

I love that there are no wasted words here. The ending is both shocking and somehow inevitable. Another great read.

Andy Edge's avatar

Thank you! This is one of my favorite comments ever, because I have spent a lot of time learning to write in this style and I absolutely love it.

Inga Jones Writes Thrillers's avatar

I can 100% tell that this is polished writing. Keep the stories coming. I always look forward to them.

Mary Jo Curtis's avatar

Yikes! Good one, Andy!

Harry Hogg's avatar

Best read of the day, by a freskin’ mile! Bravo, mate. Loved it.

Andy Edge's avatar

So happy you enjoyed the story! Thanks for reading 💛

Posy Churchgate's avatar

Excellent story- the tension & menaces were vividly portrayed.

I was guessing towards that twisted ending.

Andy Edge's avatar

Thank you! Yes, this one was only a little twisty 🤣

Alex Jenkin's avatar

Nailed the twist with a cruel and twisted precision! Nice work 😳

Becky Hayward's avatar

Oooh. Thats a good one! 👏👏😳

Andy Edge's avatar

So glad you liked it! 🥰

CAT Wyatt's avatar

WOW. Didn't see that happening. Great writing Andy.

Andy Edge's avatar

Ohh I love when you don’t see it coming! Thanks for reading 💛

Gregory Blair's avatar

Well...just...yuck, dammit! Great writing; totally kept me intrigued.

Andy Edge's avatar

Man, I love a good yuck! 😎 Thank you!

Katrina C's avatar

The twist at the end really got me. Great story!

Andy Edge's avatar

I do love a good twist. I knew this one wasn’t overly twisty, but I still tried to give a little nudge :) Thanks for reading 💛